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Do you shardmind if I take a moment of your time?
Oh gee, geode.
“A young girl who’s skin is a bright red with most of her right side containing large patches of smooth crimson crystals that seem to replace the flesh it covers..” And I thought the pain in the diodes all down my left side was bad. Fellas, you’re not breaking off a piece without a mining pick. “All throughout her body, her blood veins are visible with a unique glow that shows every inch of flowing blood.” Ought to make CT scans quicker, except that only her blood veins are visible, as opposed to… the other ones.
“Both eyes have a unique look, her left eye contains no white but is now pink and contains a feline-like pupil that glows crimson in color.” As we all know, cats are halfway between people and rock candy. “Her right side is far different, containing no physical eye but made up by swirling, cloudy energies that form a fiery orange iris with a pure black pupil in the core of the vortex.” On one side, we have a cat’s eye with conjunctivitis. On the other, we have the Great Red Spot.
“A large scar glowing bright red, like an open wound that never fully healed, sets over the right side of her face from the top of her brow, over her eye and down just below the edge of her lips.” As open wounds typically do, of course. It’s interesting, normally it’s the guys that go for the badassery scar. In this case it’s a girl whose face looks like Netherstorm.
“Both ears would be far too short for an elf and they would look completely human if not for the fact that the tips are pointed, however if one were to inspect closer there would be tiny scars done by blade and stitching, perhaps to give it that look.” So she’s not so much an ‘actual elf’ as she is a ‘deviantArt target demographic.’
“Finally, her body is neither as lithe or graceful as most elves are, but rather voluptuous when compared to the average female elf, however by no means does she look overweight and, if seen, there would be some muscle tone on her arms, legs, and perhaps even her stomach.” I’m not a human! I swear it! I’m just… a sin’dorei from the House of Mix-a-lot!
How can we make this better? By not slowly morphing into my home campaign’s avenger of Ioun. Elves have good lore! We here at RPL like elf lore! There should never be anything boring about being a ‘mere’ sin’dorei. Histories of betrayal and brushes with too much (?) power color the blood elves, and the reactions to and beliefs toward such events ensure a great variety of personality in the race. Be an elven warlock, not a half-garnet.
Everything else about this RSP is great. It’s physical description only with no crazy backstory or OOC rants about how to /roll fight. It’s solid. You just need to start abiding by the whole Don’t Make People Want to Burn Me at the Stake rule and you should be in good shape.